Here is the first draft of my thriller.
This is the First Draft of my video.
I showed this clip to numerous different people who I thought were best suited for this film, as they fit the criteria of my target audience.
The general feedback was positive yet there was still some suggestions for improvement:
- Make the story a bit more revealing to get a better understanding
- The sound effects at the beginning were too loud
- The transitions from the credits didn't flow well
I've taken all of this into account and I've adjusted the sound at the beginning of the film and I'm currently working on fixing the transitions.
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